EVER AFTER
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can you meet the horizon?
EVER AFTER
I read a story when I was young that ever after and happiness go hand in hand. So I dreamt of my prince or my knight or a sexy Denzel look alike would come to sweep me off my feet, shower me with diamonds and roses and kisses while carrying me over the threshold of happily ever after. No one told me about communication, patience tolerance for the things that men do. Forgotten toilet seats dishes in the sink Monday night foot ball taking over my television. Less space in my bed. Enough said. So where is that happily ever after ending I used to read about? I’m still waiting anticipating meeting the horizon and finding out what happily ever after is. |
Submitted on 2006-08-02 17:21:21 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| I likes this one a lot also! very good write the last stanzza was my favorite it was very precise nice job! | Posted on 2007-10-04 00:00:00 | by tiffaroox3 | [ Reply to This ] | i'm 29, married and still lookin for 'happy ever after'!! lol | im begining to feel its a myth. a legend. great poem. i think it expresses every females thoughts exactly! whirl** | Posted on 2006-08-12 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ] | This poem was written very well.. I like the association to typical children's books at the beginning. I like the last stanza how you turn it into your happily ever after. how you are still waiting for this happy thing to happen. keep up the good write. | R.Bayden | Posted on 2006-08-04 00:00:00 | by remedy bayden | [ Reply to This ] | I liked the way your poem's written. It was kind of sad but fun. I don't know if that's what you meant, or what you wanted. Anyways, it's original, and it has an important message. Happiness is not an easy thing to achieve. | I liked the ending because you said, that you don't know everything about life or happiness, but you know that maybe in the future you will know, so you're waiting for that. I’m still waiting anticipating meeting the horizon and finding out what happily ever after is. Good job! Keep writing. XoXo Gaby | Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by Lost_Delirious | [ Reply to This ] | |
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