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caked up in lies

Author: crazedscenester
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mehh..bad poem about loneliness...

caked up in lies

after all the clubs are closed.
you know that you still stand,alone
smeared black ink beneath
piercing blue eyes,
plump lips with crimson stains,
girl, you're so caked up in lies
that mischevious blue,
smiling, dying beneath the surface
your smiles are so plastic
your laughs are pre-recorded
give me something real to work with
baby doll, i promise this time
the boys will stay
and maybe you won't feel so empty
after all

Submitted on 2006-08-02 17:25:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  smiling, dying beneath the surface
your smiles are so plastic
the repetion of smiles doesn't really work well
and why would the boys staying make the gilr feel less empty?
I like the idea of a girl trying to find love in all the wrong places,,
| Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by mimi | [ Reply to This ]

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