How can one say anything bad to this Deeps. . . I'm sure many of us have an experience of this one too many times. I like your poem for the pure and raw simplicity of it. . . there's no metaphors nor read between the lines deal. It is what it is and the dedication makes it all the more grand. I'm sooooooo glad you wrote another one. -stacey m-
theres something really repetitive about this that i dont like, but thats just me.
i think ite great when you meet people like this. tehy can erally get you through stuff, normally you didnt even consider you needed help getting through ut until then. hope that you meet them again, i really do. hope the world treats them well.
well this piece was dedicated to a certain someone who obviously meant a lot to you, so its not my place to comment offensively, but the repitition did get to me a bit in the 3rd stanza starting with the first and second.
the last stanza was the most touching of them all. almost haunting, leaving a slight nostalgic scent of her to linger in...