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Fuck You Too


Author: pengwinn7teen
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Words: 128
Class/Type: Poetry /Angry
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The angry ramblings of a depressed preteen with an alcoholic mother. Yay! ^_^


Fuck You Too



Smell of beer
It’s all over my hands
The stench of alcohol
From those fucking cans
I cleaned them up for you

Fuck this shit
Fuck everything that you “do”
Fuck your highest horse
And fuck you too

Trail of tears
Streaking down my cheeks
The salty tracks
From your fucking abuse
I cried over you

Fuck this shit
Fuck everything you say
Fuck your super-ego
And fuck you too

Smell of beer
Mixing with my tears
All over my hands and face
From those fucking cans
I cleaned them, I cried, just for you

Fuck this shit
Fuck everything you try to “do”
Fuck everything you say to me
And fuck you too
You heard me, fuck you too.




Submitted on 2006-08-02 22:54:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i can see why you are angry... have you tried alonnon? I'm usually not a fan of escessive sursing, there are other creative ways to get your point across, but this one seems justified...
good luck with everything
| Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by mimi | [ Reply to This ]


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