Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Powerless Chaosdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: SinCeer05
    ASL Info:    21mVA
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 243/279/168
    Words: 209
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 922
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1227



    Description:
       The world is powerless and chaotic without creative will. To follow the norm would be to think inside a box. Which can only result in built up hate towards the confining power that holds back free will. Go against the norm or any factor that limits free will.

    This verse is anthing but political or religious, just stating or hinting that everyone should be themselves and who they really are.....communicate views openly.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsPowerless Chaosdots
    -------------------------------------------


    stand jaded with this labrynth of power
    like when the twin towers were invaded on that eleventh hour
    chaotic disruption is debated but whats the result of unstated corruption
    without symbolic hope were nothing till were all hated and soaked with destruction
    will we see through the smoke were engulfed in
    or choke through the eruption
    of different views, faced into mirrors that erase truth
    how did we lose the taste of youth and form to grow and deface free will to choose
    to carry morals in a race to survive without rules- why do we quarral just to feel safe and alive excused
    unbruised-when ignorance is bliss, but im tellin you that sorrow will be missed
    if we strive forward to wish and not just list shit to do tomorrow or follow risk
    do what works for mankind
    fix the quirks of our own land mines
    and not damn-times or not stand to decipher all signs cuz we all can find
    a true writer in all our minds, not just a fighter but one form-
    that is heavy but divine- lighter then the medley of thinkin about how to get ready- and not conform-
    a real surviver who stays steady/ n liver and rhyme against the NORM




    Submitted on 2006-08-03 01:04:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      hey bubz, i love this, it is something that i feel too, and its good that u defined this as something inspirational and powerfull,
    keep em cummin
    kyrenia
    | Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
      stand jaded with this labrynth of power
    like when the twin towers were invaded on that eleventh hour
    chaotic disruption is debated but whats the result of unstated corruption
    without symbolic hope were nothing till were all hated and soaked with destruction

    these lines were amazing. u opened up a Pandora's Box of creativity and even after u let all the afflictions out of the cube Hope was still there fighting for life. amazing. my whole fave list is gonna be ur [censored] at this rate.
    | Posted on 2006-08-17 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    113105

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    You Make Me speechless written by elephantasia
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    Bond written by saartha
    Push written by JanePlane
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    In the end written by Janesaddiction
    Linger written by saartha
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    It's been a while written by Sharati_hottie
    To written by SavedDragon
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    Cage written by distortedcloud
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry