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    dots Submission Name: pocket version of lovedots
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    Author: imagination
    ASL Info:    18/male/India
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 165/50/23
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 196
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 647



    Description:
       this poem is about love being a illusion, and the final meaning is that you have to practical to save your relationship.


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    dotspocket version of lovedots
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    pocket version of love,
    human version of love,

    kindness in desert
    sweet rain in ocean
    light in night

    these were inked lines
    in shirt pocket of mine
    romantic, don’t you think?
    A white shirt
    innocent love of dirt,
    soap attraction for dirt,
    what about paper in shirt?
    It looked like indigo shirt

    mirage in desert
    sweetness in ocean's water
    rainbow for blind

    promise, washed away,
    paper, torn away,
    from next time
    pay a little on laminating ways.




    Submitted on 2006-08-03 01:32:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow this one have a deep meaning, i mean you have chosen a good words. I have read it twice but still cant get the meaning, i would like if you give some description on it. and i think "tron" it should be torn. Overall this work have a chosen vocab and should have a great meaning, though i am still cant get the meaning (Coz i am a beginner )

    Keep it up m8, u r rite we have some probs with love, hope we will find our love soon.


    -garnet4david-
    | Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by garnet4david | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow this one have a deep meaning, i mean you have chosen a good words. I have read it twice but still cant get the meaning, i would like if you give some description on it. and i think "tron" it should be torn. Overall this work have a chosen vocab and should have a great meaning, though i am still cant get the meaning (Coz i am a beginner )

    Keep it up m8, u r rite we have some probs with love, hope we will find our love soon.


    -garnet4david-
    | Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by garnet4david | [ Reply to This ]



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