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    dots Submission Name: I am....dots

    Author: Ceedra47
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 2/5/48
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI am....dots

    A shattered cough,
    Lost breath,
    Broken skin,
    I am Death.

    A single look,
    A glance above,
    A glimmering eye,
    I am Love.

    A touch that lied,
    Broken Trust,
    Lost Love,
    I am Lust.

    Wondering alone,
    Lost Fate,
    Never Love,
    I am Hate.

    A gracious smile,
    A golden key,
    A gate of Trust,
    I am Destiny.

    Unbroken lies,
    Not left in dust,
    An open arch,
    I am Trust.

    A broken smile,
    I do defy,
    What is truth?
    I am a Lie.

    A happy time,
    Everyone's strife,
    You'll never forget,
    That I am Life.

    Submitted on 2006-08-03 02:01:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Now I know I am not meant to just give compliments, but this is seriously the coolest poem I've ever read. It had an amazing beat to it, really cool rhyming and timing (hehe I rhymed!) This poem is, as of this moment, on my favourites.
    | Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by steffunni | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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