Poem 4 loc blue

Author: Poeticprincess ASL Info:    18/f/Germany Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104 Words: 61

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Poem 4 loc blue

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Roses are red violets are blue how can i express how much i love you wishing my lips 2 your lips so my heart can reach the sky when i'm talking to you it's impossible 2 lie So why try? I mean shit the sky is still blue so what else can i say other than i love you

Submitted on 2006-08-03 12:39:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This is cute, dosen't flow quite right but it's cute.

| Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]

yeah I agree with dude...it don't flow that right...but if my girl gave me some [censored] like this it would still make me happy...

| Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]

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