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Submission Name: Poem 4 loc blue dots

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Author:	Poeticprincess
ASL Info:	18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:	3.3 - 333/325/104
Words:	61

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	902
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	366

Description:
I'm Sprung lol. I admit it, he got me sprung, anyways he told me to write him a poem so i wrote this lol. its kinda idk..not my style but anyways tell me what you think

Poem 4 loc blue dots

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Roses are red
violets are blue
how can i express
how much i love you

wishing my lips 2 your lips
so my heart can reach the sky
when i'm talking to you
it's impossible 2 lie

So why try?
I mean shit the sky is still blue
so what else can i say other than
i love you

Submitted on 2006-08-03 12:39:48 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
This is cute, dosen't flow quite right but it's cute.
| Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
yeah I agree with dude...it don't flow that right...but if my girl gave me some [censored] like this it would still make me happy...
| Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]

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