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Submission Name: used dots

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Author:	eowyn
ASL Info:	18/f/australia
Elite Ratio:	5.47 - 227/153/76
Words:	114

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	184
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	642

Description:
a rewrite of one of the untitleds i posted a while ago. its about how i terated my BF before we moved in together. it doesnt need more explination.

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I admit it openly now
That I had never intended to have
You. You were a tool to use
To ease my heart and make life
Bearable for a day, or a week.
I abused you, wrung you out.
You had been a security blanket for me
And you knew it all to well.
(I see it now)
When I finally had the courage
To correct my ill deeds
I tripped on my own words.
There had been method in your madness,
Living with me.
(Loving me)
You caught me in a steel trap
And never let me know.
You made me let you love me
And made me love you back.

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  Wow,I think this is very relatable,I wont bother you by telling you my sob stories or anything but
it struck a chord.The last two lines are almost powerfull enough to stand on their own and sum up the rest ,
they are easy to understand yet ressonate a lot of depth.Great work.

-Raphael
| Posted on 2007-02-23 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]
  way to my heart from this poem, you are first person who brought tears in my eyes, this poem touched me deeply,
when i was 16, a girl apporched me we became good friends or maybe more than that, she was my first and true love, she used me in each and everyway (this is not a sexual story), and i to knowingly let her use me beliving that one day she will start loving me. But this was just an illusion, i never knew sometimes love can be distructive, maybe i payed to much for love.
I am sorry to write all these things

But your poem is really nice, original, having your heart in it, well the fact that you wrote down complete truth is what makes this poem special.

one more thing i liked is that you didn't tried to rhyme it, this was really important since in a way it protected the very unique taste of this poem.

thanks for writting such an amazing poem,

You caught me in a steel trap
And never let me know.
You made me let you love me
And made me love you back.

these lines are my fav for its meaning, i wish this could have been with me.

bye and hope you will write like this always, i will love to cry again.

thanks
bye

nishant
| Posted on 2006-08-05 00:00:00 | by imagination | [ Reply to This ]
  I really like this poem but I don't understand the ending

"You made me let you love me
And made me love you back."

Jess
| Posted on 2006-08-29 00:00:00 | by inlove2009 | [ Reply to This ]

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