Description: I'm still working on this...it popped into my head and I didn't want to forget it. You can comment on this part if you want..give me ideas of any changes you think would help it out..... or..if you want...write your own ending and let me know! :)
hmm... yeah it would be interesting to see how it turns out in the end.. :)... i'm real curious though how "mind's eye" relates to it.. cuz i like that. : O_o.. huh? ya know me.. confused REAL easy :P... love ya sis! :)
well this part is really good so far i wouldnt change it. u could almost leave it as a simple poem and not add to it. but i like it so far. cant wait to read the rest.
Submission Name: Mind's Eye
