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The voice is near


Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
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Words: 191
Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship
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The voice is near



The rain fell from the sky
the blackest tears she did cry
it was a heartache of a night
but a voice within cried ''don't give up the fight''

her hands they shook with fear
she screamed so loud but no one could hear
she wanted to give up the fight
but a voice within cried ''no, not tonight''

If you listen you will hear
the voice is very near
''be strong, hold on, fight this fight
for tonight is not your last night''

A boy sat cold and sad
inside he felt so bad
he wanted to run and hide
but a voice in his ear whispered ''i'll stay by your side''

He stood on the ledge, wind through his hair
he felt he could die and no one would care
All his life he'd felt alone, he looked down ready to fall
but a hand found his and a voice said to him ''you're not alone, not at all..''

If you listen you will hear
the voice is very near
if you look you will see
you're not alone, you have me




Submitted on 2006-08-05 01:35:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is a very sweet poem, I liked it alot. It makes me think of perhaps God watching over you or maybe a guardian angel of some sort. It's good to feel the closeness of someone knowing they're there for you no matter what. You're never alone. You did a great job with this one. Awesome :).

~Cris
| Posted on 2006-08-05 00:00:00 | by my_worst_fear85 | [ Reply to This ]
  i loved this poem! it reminds me allot of those songs that are like good influence and help you in life...

^_^

it gives a story about some one that can be going through the same thing you are.

Nice job^_^

kay
| Posted on 2006-08-14 00:00:00 | by Kay | [ Reply to This ]
  i loved this poem! it reminds me allot of those songs that are like good influence and help you in life...

^_^

it gives a story about some one that can be going through the same thing you are.

Nice job^_^

kay
| Posted on 2006-08-14 00:00:00 | by Kay | [ Reply to This ]


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