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    dots Submission Name: Changedots
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    Author: Leala
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 245/299/70
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 130
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 356



    Description:
       I was cleaning out my desk and found this poem I'd written... I can't edit it now.. since I dont believe in editing past two days within writing it. Maybe I will write a different poem based off this... but what do you think of this one?


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    S l o w l y
    I change

    coming to terms
    beginning paths.

    An eruption lingers...
    lingers under the surface.

    Cleansing?
    Or purely destructive?

    It. Comes.

    Are you ready?
    We'll see...

    Am I ready?
    Will I survive this one?




    Submitted on 2006-08-05 17:53:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    I like it because of the connection it draws to anyone and everyone.

    Honestly I wish I could say more but it's a very short and concise poem and you don't have any typos. I think perhaps basing another poem off this one would be a good idea because it's such a good topic that's easy to play around with.
    | Posted on 2006-08-05 00:00:00 | by AlmostEloquent | [ Reply to This ]



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