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    dots Submission Name: A soul well founddots
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    Author: Jack_s_Off
    Elite Ratio:    1.61 - 1/2/6
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 892
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    Description:
       Well I wonder what this is about.

    It's kind of dumb, but the meaning behind it is ture enough.

    I once heard this, and it makes sense, and this is how I feel.

    "True love is the souls recognition of it's counter part in another."- Owen Wilson.

    It's true.

    Oh yeah and you, yeah you, I love you.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsA soul well founddots
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    I sit here pondering on where I was a month ago,lost without a clue, ready to die without a fight.
    and then there was you. A saving grace of sorts, a voice calling out from somewhere unknown.

    The first time we spoke, it was for hours. Your voice made my night, made my hour, made my minuet, made my second. Your laugh comforted me.

    The thought of how wierd you seemed, intreuiged me, it drew me closer to you.

    And now we are here, where we are suppouse to be. Without a doubt in my mind, I want to keep you around, for as long as I can.

    If given the chance I would fight for our love, it is worth a struggle, an arguement, a spit or a spat. For you I would do my share of dirty work.

    To me you are perfect, and with you I am perfect.


    The feelings I've felt, have surpassed all others, for any one I have ever known or held or will hold, these are the moments I live for.


    You still make my night, my hour, my minuet, my second. You will always make me happy.




    Submitted on 2006-08-05 18:56:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow. I was feeling this, definitely. Something about the non-chalance of the poem, I guess, you wrote in a way that was just non-poetic enough to actually be very poetic in a unique way. Am I making sense? Probably not, but the way you wrote it really affected me, I liked it a lot. Made me smile. Good work, definitely going on my favorites.

    -Guernica
    | Posted on 2006-08-06 00:00:00 | by Guernica | [ Reply to This ]


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