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    dots Submission Name: I'll Come Up With It Later...dots
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    Author: UselessPageFill
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    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI'll Come Up With It Later...dots
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    thursday night spent sober
    in bathroom
    reading about things and people
    who will never concern me,
    as they eat in crumbling whorehouses
    and sleep in psilyocybin taxi cabs.
    people who get what they want
    through a combination of luck and fate,
    while they swallow acetone
    and stick talking needles into their arms,
    filling their bodies
    from head to toe
    with shameless bliss.
    last night spent outside
    with pimply teenage alter ego,
    staring at non-existant bright lights
    and talking about things that can only be discussed
    under proper circumstance, subconciously fading
    into what is as close to silence as possible
    with the absence of nothing in our world
    but two ignorant voices, drifting thereafter into a reluctant sleep
    only to wake three hours later
    with the stench of
    cat piss and self deprecation.




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