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    dots Submission Name: Destiny [Meant to Be]dots
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    Author: Toxic Rose
    Elite Ratio:    5.82 - 159/220/97
    Words: 405
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 964
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    Description:
       Okay, so there's this guy.
    ...How many times have I said that before?
    But he's... everything I'd like in a guy. Smarter than me, stronger than me, taller than me [even though that particular isn't too hard], Christian, deep at times, funny, nice, sweet... Ugh, I could go on. But he lives 150 miles away.


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    dotsDestiny [Meant to Be]dots
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    As I look back
    On memories past
    And why our love has passed us by,
    I can't help but think
    That I'm standing on the brink
    Of going crazy, with only you on my mind

    I can't believe
    We were meant to be
    Even though you're so far away
    I can't believe
    That this is destiny
    But I think about you every day

    I can't believe
    We were meant to be
    But I hope our love is true
    I can't believe
    That this is destiny
    But every day I'll be thinking of you

    You were always there
    When no one dared
    To help me pass the lonely times
    Your whole new world
    Captured my soul
    And my heart- baby you're on my mind

    I can't believe
    We were meant to be
    Even though you're so far away
    I can't believe
    That this is destiny
    But I think about you every day

    I can't believe
    We were meant to be
    But I pray our love is true
    I can't believe
    That this is destiny
    But every day I'll be thinking of you

    Oh, baby I know
    It might be too late
    My heart's grown cold
    Since you went away

    Oh, I believe
    We were meant to be
    Even though you're so far away
    'Cause my heart believes
    That this is destiny
    And I think about you every day

    I've always believed
    We were meant to be
    And my heart knew our love is true
    You've helped me see
    That this is destiny
    And every day I'll be thinking of you

    It's destiny, I know
    We were meant to be, for sure.
    But can I wait for you?
    We'll just have to see
    Oh, how your love has blinded me

    Oh, I believe
    We were meant to be
    Even though you're so far away
    'Cause my heart believes
    That this is destiny
    And I think about you every day

    I've always believed
    We were meant to be
    And my heart knew our love is true
    You've helped me see
    That this is destiny
    And every day I'll be thinking of you

    It's my destiny
    To be with you
    It was meant to be
    Meant to be
    Oh, meant to be


    It's our destiny.





    Submitted on 2006-08-07 15:52:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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