honestly thas kinda hot. I thot u were talkin about the black box in that dude's basement that predicts the future. So I was a lil disappointed, but i got over it quickly. I suppose there really is nothing more frightening than the unknown, and all other fear basically stems from that. I like the simplicity of lines like 'the color is disturbing.' Very basic, but it speaks volumes. I dunno, i think i must be rambling, but I really like this one. shard
Nice write. It flowed well, the word choice was simple yet effective. I liked this alot because it was original and I've never read anything like it before. I don't really have much more to say except that it was very well written and I'm adding it to my favs. Keep up the awesome work and I'll keep reading.