Great rhythm, great rhymes ... a really enchanting poem for my "masochistic" Self ;) Life is sometimes just too freaky to be controlled by its owner... we all want ...ah... peace and "security" (from time to time at least).
this screams of unrequited love. thats the worst kind of love.. merely infatuation that isnt returned. everything rolls off the tip of the tongue, well done. what are you into anyway?...tell me more please.