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    dots Submission Name: Don'tdots
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    Author: Foreseer
    ASL Info:    20/F/In Love
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 156/86/23
    Words: 226
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 1021
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1382



    Description:
       Uh...I don't know what to describe. I just wrote it.


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    dotsDon'tdots
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    You see me go by
    you wonder why,
    I don't even say hi.
    You should see
    exactly how it's gonna be.
    The fact that you
    don't care at all
    doesn't mean
    I gotta fall.

    [Chorus:]
    Don't play no games,
    I warned you babe.
    Didn't you know
    that it comes back to you.
    Don't make no lies
    it's seen in your eyes.
    I wanted you
    and I wanted
    love too.
    Just don't.

    I wanted you to take me in
    your arms and hold me tight.
    No heart breakes,
    no missing points.
    Was what I really wanted.
    But I've come to see
    what you did to me.

    [Chorus:]
    Don't play no games,
    I warned you babe.
    Didn't you know
    that it comes back to you.
    Don't make no lies
    it's seen in your eyes.
    I wanted you
    and I wanted
    love too.
    Just don't.

    With me now there's
    no more tries.
    You had with me
    your lovely game.
    But I've movin' on.
    You're in the dark.
    My love is with another,
    who doesn't try
    to be so wise.
    He simply let's me fly.




    Submitted on 2006-08-08 18:03:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Omg did you really write this song??? I love it! It was so good and well written
    | Posted on 2006-08-14 00:00:00 | by poetinprogress | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this its wickd hott! <3 Brittaney-Mae
    | Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by justkillme08 | [ Reply to This ]
      i really liked this one...super awesome song!

    Brittany
    | Posted on 2006-08-18 00:00:00 | by dark_secrets_ | [ Reply to This ]


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