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    dots Submission Name: Connectiondots
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    Author: Katana Ryoko
    ASL Info:    17/F/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 483/428/109
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 730
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       It's a work in progress!!!!I'm not sure what it is missing.


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    dotsConnectiondots
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    Take a minute to
    Sit back and watch
    The love around you
    And sigh sadly
    As you ask why
    Haven't I found that
    Connection to a soul
    Meant just for me
    My heart needs to
    Shine brighty to one
    Who cares enough
    To follow the light
    Back to its source
    The healing waters
    Of one for another
    To heal the cuts of
    The wounded heart
    And chase the shadows
    From the demented mind
    To help them look up
    The true meaning of love
    In a dictionary all knowimg




    Submitted on 2006-08-08 18:48:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I think you were saying love can heal all, so embrace it and you will have lead a full and great life! :) Good job! Have a on me!
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by Twisted | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a very heartfelt poem that expresses the feelings very clearly i hope you find that person and i am sure you will
    | Posted on 2006-11-02 00:00:00 | by psycho love | [ Reply to This ]
      very nice. I can feel the longing in it. very good read.
    have fun,
    bradley
    | Posted on 2006-11-01 00:00:00 | by bradengine | [ Reply to This ]
      i love the flow. it is a really nice piece. i really jope to read more by you soon. keep posting. you are a wonderful writer!!
    love
    tina
    | Posted on 2006-08-08 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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