your love

Author: od9.1.04 ASL Info:    15/f/oh Elite Ratio:    1.68 - 18 /38 /19 Words: 116

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your love

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your touch it wipes away my tears.. and conqures all my fears. your eyes show me you're sure.. the look is my longing cure. your kisses take away my aching pain.. and relieves years of stress and strain. your face reassures my future plans.. with you i'll explore new foreign lands. your soul wraps around me.. and carresses me sweetly. your heart is my comfort my shield.. my safety and wildflower field. your love is my love forever more.. your the one i love.. mi amor.

Submitted on 2006-08-08 21:09:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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very nice not my type of poetry but it was good keep at it u've got the makings 2 b great

| Posted on 2006-08-13 00:00:00 | by brokenbylove | [ Reply to This ]

beautiful sentiment, plainly put across. i liked it.i'm a sucker for romantic verse. nice work. whirl

| Posted on 2006-08-10 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]

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