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    dots Submission Name: nevermind(sinceer diss)dots
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    Author: PROlifik
    ASL Info:    23/m/va
    Elite Ratio:    2.01 - 23/28/21
    Words: 1038
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 1297
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    Bytes: 5944



    Description:
       diss song...puttin him in his place...lettin em kno he crossed the line...ballgame


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    dotsnevermind(sinceer diss)dots
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    (intro-D-LAW)
    FUCK 'EM
    no chorus,fuck this bitch,fuckin fake ass muthafucka...man FUCK YALL HATERS
    THIS MANS A FAKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE


    HE WRITES POEMS AND LOVE LYRICS JUST FOR COMMENTS AND YALLS FAVORITE SELECTIONS,THATS ALL HE IS ABOUT...DONT GIVE INTO THE BULLSHIT........PLEASE
    dont add him to ya favorites...this man just wants attention




    you takin cheap shots tryin to make ya whole verse just low blow issues ill leave ya a no-show with an empty box of tissues,ive just plain out had it wit this addict -everytime your dumb ass gets a chance to come out of the attic you decide to fuckin start static come up with a few one liners like you swear your magic,doped out coked out starin at a computer screen till 5 am thinkin bout how you can turn ya next salery into a fuckin bag of something powdery its fuckin cowerdly an this the same muthafucka who swear he can overpower me,sit the fuck back down man,you been killed in every fuckin battle you attempt weather its me or someone else -you had a chance to work with me just be content with the words of wisdom i lent -welcomed you to my mind just fuckin be happy i aint charge you rent-we all kno where your talent went(*cough cough*)ive barely scratched the surface-havent even fuckin made a dent in my response on how you choose to vent"ya honor please" shut the fuck up before you get slapped with contempt your fuckin evidence is exempt-this rap shit is a full time job-aint no room for temps
    mad cuz his girlfriend a lesbian his boyfriend wont let em roll play-his trap stars wont let em hold yay
    damn everyday gotta feel like a cold day-you fuckin homo go throw on some coldplay reminese bout an old day
    cant even beleive your poetry is that fuckin gay-actually go hed-write another verse we can all just throw away-you throw away-FUCK YOU when the FUCK will you just go away
    90 percent of your gotdamn lines dont make sense-are you TRYING to confuse people????
    someone should really beat the living shit outta you with that keyboard or fuckin get you off them drugs so you can see more and fuckin realize this involves talent and YOU NEED MORE,you dont even have to read more to see whore that your fuckin short career is gonna go up in c-4
    stupid ass,retarded ass,your a fuckin moron man think about it-only mutahfucka i kno loses everyting,forgetfull
    fuckin shit for brains muthafucka gets confused when it rains,fuckin snorts FAKE coke an asks why he has nose pains-muthafucka has no car cuz he cant fuckin stay awake when he switchin lanes,got that addiction now dont ya?can ya feel it itch in ya veins?cant handle his liquior had an accident in his hanes-bring up my personal life???STUPID BITCH all you know is names you dont kno the fuckin situatuions im facin you dont fuckin kno the reasons im pacin-bring her up ONE MORE FUCKIN TIME it will be your name there erasin
    your just fuckin dumb your not a menace-saw you attempt to talk to that girl -IDIOT- you couldnt even hold a sentance-she knew you were gay hahaha YOU PLAY TENNIS..damn dude it wasnt my inention in this to bring attention to this i didnt wanna mention this but i looked up your record online an YOU ON THE PROTECTION LIST,no wonder everyone detectin shit-welcome to d-law 101 BITCH an you on the dention list for showin all that affection in ya poetry BITCH,every fuckin FAKE ASS POEM YOU WRITE you just growin BITCH,yo to all yall he personaly told me he writes those poems just FOR COMMENTS,they dont mean SHIT,now yall agree fuck this BITCH????,moved his raps to a new website and they called him a BITER,now how can you truely call this man a writter????????,i said it before and i will SAY IT AGAIN you couldnt produce fire if you was holdin a bic lighter fuckin small time coke addict YOU A FAKEEEEEEEEEEE not even close to a real rhymer ...yo i talked to * *she said you were just like a real first timer hahaha,you fake ass you just a social climber haha look at you tryin to wine an dine her man you can only take her to a diner...maaaaannnnnn aint nothin finer...oh...yo..i can tell you where to find her haha MIKE ya seats aint leather just VYNAL-i aint the only one that agrees you SUCK so i guess thats FINAL,oh man haha dont stop writtin tho-pray for survival...sike HAHA just fuckin pray to ME use my lyrics as ya bible you dont even come close to a rival-get the FUCK away from me you got no fuckin chance when i make my fuckin arrival-IM LIVER
    you makin diss songs at fuckin people YOU DONT EVEN KNOW,you fuckin HO just do the thing you do best in life-BE A NO SHOW,you no flow HO... LET ELITE KNOW YOUR FUCKIN ADDICTED TO BLOW,muthafucka you would be my bitch if i was slangin snow,i kno all you kno left me the stash an i SMOKED all ya dro
    wanna fuckin go diss to diss?????BITCH LETS GO,all that poetry all that fuckin wack SHIT...BITCH YOU OWE ME,YOU FUCKIN DUMBASS BITCH WHAT THE FUCK YOU GOT TO SHOW ME????fake ass homie YOU STUPID FUCKIN BITCH YOU DONT KNOW ME let these lyrics hit a lil to close to home watch you die SLOWLY you fuckin phoney theres no fuckin way your winnin over ME,ask ************ im her fuckin ONE AND ONLY-put the fuckin pen down its OVER 'G'



    (outro-D-LAW)
    SHUT THE FUCK UP MAN,its over,you LOST admit it,you ADDCIT,dont you EVER mention the names of the women in my life dont you EVER cross that line you fuckin BITCH,aint my fault you lonely...try an get some money for that 'white lady' you FIEND...dont fuckin try to hit close to home wit ya lryics you FUCKIN CHUMP..muthafucka you a busta...SEE ME WHEN I LAND IN YA FUCKIN TERRITORY....FUCK ya life story ..sinQUEER,versatyle the petafile,engimatic the fuckin FAGGOTT...........and you realer than me?????
    shut UP....HANDS OFF THE KEYBOARD




    Submitted on 2006-08-09 02:07:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      your rhymes were on point and it flowed wit serious anger.
    you channeled ya anger nicely, i know i push your buttons but im too comfortable wit my self, meaning that i dont have a line you can cross sooo, im gonna try and dig out this grave you put me in, cuz i did get murdered........Jesssus.......but just know there will be a response...........
    maybe not today or tomorrow but-
    i will elevate to your level or should i say stoop to your level-ha

    i will try and mimic(mock) the anger you put into this one. but its hard for me cuz im not an angry person
    it should be
    entertaining for me none the less

    PC
    | Posted on 2006-08-09 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm afraid to ask how long it took you to write this thing.

    Maybe you should take up gardening, or something. Help you calm your nerves a little. :D
    | Posted on 2006-08-09 00:00:00 | by Mop_box | [ Reply to This ]
      damn dawg... just damn. I haven't heard anyone get cracked on like that at a f'n POETRY site beofre. thats hot... lolol yeah you get added to the faves....
    DEUCE

    Charyce
    | Posted on 2006-08-24 00:00:00 | by prettygrnEyes | [ Reply to This ]


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