You're dady's disgrace? Oh my golly gosh! lol, Daddy would never disgrace you, he loves us, lol. Well, this sounded a bit more like the ending to a good poem, except the whole 'the pain inside' stuff, but it would all depend on the body of the entire poem. Try adding more to this, and make this the ending to whatever you come up with, as long as it fits, lol. Peace sis.