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    dots Submission Name: Why......?dots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       Waiting for a reply from an instance in eyes to embrace.......


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    dotsWhy......?dots
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    Cry me out till a tear to cry,
    silence more painful than death itself.
    Why do you stay in this hate absurd,
    love that is all conveyed in words.

    Wait for the sun with time in space,
    in fear of darkness never to end.
    Why do you stay with silence in your eyes,
    a yes or no, please make me cry.

    No just to say i will never like you,
    an angel in life that just passed away.
    Yes to say that i love you,
    hope in all with a heart to pray.......maya




    Submitted on 2006-08-09 06:05:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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