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To Love Your Enemy

Author: MidnightMelody
ASL Info:    18/f/US
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 44 /52 /55
Words: 267
Class/Type: Poetry /Religious
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To Love Your Enemy

She said you've changed
but I hardly believe that
The last time I saw you
you seemed the same only...taller

Deep in my heart
I want to know that
you are no longer that self-fish, perverted dork.
I do. I do.

What's holding me back? -You may ask

Hatred. I hate you.
I never thought it would come to this,
but I have to stop lieing to myself.
I hate you.

How can I forgive you?
I don't take kindly to sexual harrassment.
And I'm supposed to forgive you?

"Forgive him you must... and then I'll forgive you"- there's that little voice..

that keeps telling me what
I should and shouldn't do.
I'm listening but it is so hard!
Or maybe it the prideful side of me that never wants to forgive this bastard.

I know I must.
Maybe somehow I will.
If I don't...
I'll never be forgiven.

"What goes around comes around"

Somehow in my heart
I must forgive this young man.
Maybe I'm making this all of nothing.
Maybe somewhere I want to hate him so badly that I wish he was dead.
And for what?
Just a little mistake?

This is what I am having to do.
I am learning to love my enemy.
A very hard choice,
Indeed, yes it is,
but somehow I know I have to.
I must.

I must learn to love my enemy
that is what Yahuah would want,my abba.

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