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    dots Submission Name: Freedom Poemdots
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    Author: Swanne
    Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 258/206/43
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 288
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 492



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    dotsFreedom Poemdots
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    To live by
    grand flags
    Fake teeth
    that spit lies

    WHITE IT OUT

    Greasy hands
    jot it down
    Yellow buzzing lights
    perpetual sound

    RED TAPE LINES

    Slits with
    sharp objects
    Dreadlock protest
    become the
    rejects


    PICKETERS DIE




    Submitted on 2006-08-09 20:37:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hmmm...this is really really interesting. Not sure what to make of it, but it has some nice evocative lines like 'RED TAPE LINES'. Interesting...

    Peace,

    Joe
    | Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      Aaaahhh, picketers...you ever see the ones that misspell their signs and never notice it?

    Once in a while I read things that people write on ES and find sometimes that when you read it from the bottom line up...it carries the same weight and message as reading it from the top down. This one did that. Well done...well written. I liked the capitalized lines too.

    Red and white??? Colors of the Canadien flag???



    Thanks for sharing!
    | Posted on 2006-08-10 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      This was wonderful as well. I want so desperatly to have a "Feedback"
    But I just would rather you feed me more poems..LOL Nice write.
    | Posted on 2006-08-09 00:00:00 | by manicsmuse | [ Reply to This ]



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