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    dots Submission Name: I amdots
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    Author: Lee Minsu
    ASL Info:    20/Male/Seoul
    Elite Ratio:    4.61 - 101/96/27
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 1174
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 513



    Description:
       A couple days ago, I got into a candid discussion with a woman about why I was gay. Interestingly, she, as a total stranger, believed she could determine my root, a sort of a quickie psychoanalysis. Needless to say, she agitated me. Afterwards, I wrote this poem after our discussion.


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    dotsI amdots
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    I am gay
    Not for who I fuck
    But for who I love
    His warmth and presense in my soul
    My waiting to connect
    To live
    To feel his strength, within and without
    I am gay
    Because my body attracts him
    Senses on high gear
    A rise in pulse
    Yearning to be touched
    Pushed
    Pulled
    Hug
    Kiss
    So intimately, as I close my eyes
    Reliving the moment in my mind
    Not because we fucked
    But because we love




    Submitted on 2006-08-10 09:22:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great poem, I liked how you expressed your feelings. I could tell it came from the heart.
    | Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by BitterSweetSoul | [ Reply to This ]


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