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    dots Submission Name: Snow queendots

    Author: shootingstar
    ASL Info:    22/f/hell
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 102/120/21
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       umm...figure it out. i refuse to condemn this one with explanation. it is unfinished, but it begged me to submit it.*sigh*

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    dotsSnow queendots

    From the window of my house of cards,
    A mirror dies in broken shards.
    Powdered paridise, traced in snow,
    Safe inside a wreckless glow.

    Seen by some, a youths mistake,
    But finds the snow queen wide awake.
    So falls the precious, crystal sand,
    Into a trembling, outstretched hand.

    Tis she who knows, her weakened prey,
    The Snow queen knows......
    And she waits for me.

    Submitted on 2004-05-19 10:04:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      WOW. A drug poem. I dont write any of these myself because I would ruin them. This is awesome. Definetly goingto my favs...but coke is dead as...dead. Heroin is coming back in a big way. hehehe anyways hear from you soon...good write.

    | Posted on 2004-06-25 00:00:00 | by brunov68 | [ Reply to This ]
      cocaine can be your lover, your friend and also your worst enemy..you definitely need to finish it for sure.
    i wrote one on addiction entitled release the hounds.
    write on.

    | Posted on 2004-05-27 00:00:00 | by pestiferous | [ Reply to This ]
      I said i was going to read your stuff, and the first one i read is the best i've read on this website so far. Excellent from beginning to end.
    | Posted on 2004-05-20 00:00:00 | by Logic | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked the main idea of this. The poem was quite unique. I thought it had a great flow and a good sense of imagery. I hope the rest of this continues to be as good as this part...
    | Posted on 2004-05-19 00:00:00 | by darkened_soul | [ Reply to This ]

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