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    dots Submission Name: Shine, Shine, Shinedots
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    Author: maiya
    ASL Info:    29
    Elite Ratio:    5.15 - 5/4/12
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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       I have a wonderful mother who really does seem to have all the answers. Just reflecting on my blessing...


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    dotsShine, Shine, Shinedots
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    True love of boundless measure
    Uninterrupted flow fills me with inspiration
    Your non-judgmental way warrants my solid confidence
    Causing me to shine, shine, shine

    Selfless giving entwines your moral fiber
    Your own aspirations in abeyance… just for me
    Assurance of realized dreams, my motivation
    Causing me to shine, shine, shine

    Genuine, compassionate support
    Ad infintum, is what you offer
    Because of you, Mother
    I can shine, shine, shine




    Submitted on 2006-08-10 14:27:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is beautiful. I almost hate to comment on this because I have nothing bad to say against it. I hate giving these comments away, darn you.

    I feel the same way about my mother. Somehow she is always right and I cant wait to be in that position myself cause it seems like I am always wrong, haha. My mom always tells me shes my biggest fan and reading this I got the same feeling of you and your mom.

    Lucky you, and lucky mother of yours.

    Take care,

    --Kayla
    | Posted on 2006-08-10 00:00:00 | by Superman | [ Reply to This ]


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