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A Dying Moment of Suicide

Author: LocketzVC
ASL Info:    18/F/pa
Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 12 /42 /18
Words: 125
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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A Dying Moment of Suicide

The message I write
I wrote for you
As my final hour approaches
I stretch my hand as far as I can
So to be held by you one last time...
But you never make it
Time stands still
You look at my now closing eyes
Wishing me peace
Knowing there is for me
But living with my memory
Each and every day
Haunts you until your time
When time stands still once more
Knowing it was all worth it
The pain gone from our eyes
In the heavenly bliss we now share
But people move onward
We are soon forgotten
Our bodies placed along side others
Only to be visited every now and then
Our Souls have moved on
And time starts up again

Submitted on 2006-08-10 20:52:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Wow, this poem was good. You described it all so well. It was sad in the beggining but as I got to the end it got better. I really loved the lines "In the heavenly bliss we now share, the pain gone from our eyes" That is so beautiful. Time stands still, and you and him meet again after all the suffering from being apart.
This was a good read.

| Posted on 2006-08-10 00:00:00 | by PiperH | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a very moving poem. It is sad when you speak of stretching your hand out as far as it can, but it is not met by your loved one. Your imagery is great, and I like the hope that you write of in the last few lines of the poem.

| Posted on 2006-08-13 00:00:00 | by Moonglow52 | [ Reply to This ]

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