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Soul Mates

Author: LocketzVC
ASL Info:    18/F/pa
Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 12 /42 /18
Words: 45
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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A reflection about real life events

Soul Mates

One night
When all is peaceful
They will meet
Soul mates once seperated
Together again
In a clearing in time
No one will find them
They are now free
Moving through time as they please
Soul mates together
Forever and ever
Nothing is the same

Submitted on 2006-08-10 20:55:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I liked this a lot. Lovers that meet again after being seperated for so long. It's like one of those happy endings in stories. I also think it's great that this is really real.
And since I enjoyed reading it so much, I'm going to put it in my favorites.

| Posted on 2006-08-20 00:00:00 | by PiperH | [ Reply to This ]
  Awww, I'd like to think I'd have this some day. You made me see two people meeting dressed all in white on a bright starry night.


So pretty. Brought me some happiness.

Hey all, I'm just trying to get my reciprocation up. I'm down in the -'s pretty far. So, don't feel the need to comment on my work. I'm trying to get back into the swing of things at Elite. Think of it as a favor from me to you! Thanks for the read!
| Posted on 2006-08-24 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]

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