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Found Out


Author: LocketzVC
ASL Info:    18/F/pa
Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 12 /42 /18
Words: 32
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Found Out



Who will know
Who will find out
We can just blow
That old candle about
Why must they care
About us so dear
We are not gonna share
Out never ending fear




Submitted on 2006-08-10 21:03:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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