Found Out

Author: LocketzVC ASL Info:    18/F/pa Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 12 /42 /18 Words: 32

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Found Out

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Who will know Who will find out We can just blow That old candle about Why must they care About us so dear We are not gonna share Out never ending fear

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