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imposter


Author: bbcherry
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this rap thing i don't know what to say...i was trying to find stuff that rymed for a poem and it ended up with this

im not really into rap.. it never was my thing but i dunno i just wrote it so if you wanna laugh till you fall outta your chair go ahead cause im right there with you or least i wish i could be to see the look on your face...ok well enough said...


imposter



sometimes i wanna change,
put on a mask,
run wild on the open range
but everytime i try,
i think i can't,
and just break down and cry
and say

why?
why, can't i be normal
why can't i fit in?
am I an imposter or
do i just love make'n a sin

do i have my own heart
or do i play
the leading part
in the show
i don't know

these cloathes are they mine?
this ticket,
on my window,
is it mine?

i'm just stuck,
so fuck forget it
so i close my eyes
and dream
and wonder...






Submitted on 2006-08-10 21:04:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  thats not bad. now u rappining it mite be. nahh im just plaayin. this write was good like i could relate and shyt.

the end is awsome cuz it ends with wonder.
| Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
  ur not as bad as i expected when you said [censored] at it that was actualy pretty good im not one to go around tellin people what to do i jest let u know i like it ^_^ take care talk to u latter maybe
| Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by Doom_Hammer | [ Reply to This ]


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