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    dots Submission Name: imposterdots
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    Author: bbcherry
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 79/34/16
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Misc/
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        this rap thing i don't know what to say...i was trying to find stuff that rymed for a poem and it ended up with this

    im not really into rap.. it never was my thing but i dunno i just wrote it so if you wanna laugh till you fall outta your chair go ahead cause im right there with you or least i wish i could be to see the look on your face...ok well enough said...


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    dotsimposterdots
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    sometimes i wanna change,
    put on a mask,
    run wild on the open range
    but everytime i try,
    i think i can't,
    and just break down and cry
    and say

    why?
    why, can't i be normal
    why can't i fit in?
    am I an imposter or
    do i just love make'n a sin

    do i have my own heart
    or do i play
    the leading part
    in the show
    i don't know

    these cloathes are they mine?
    this ticket,
    on my window,
    is it mine?

    i'm just stuck,
    so fuck forget it
    so i close my eyes
    and dream
    and wonder...






    Submitted on 2006-08-10 21:04:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      thats not bad. now u rappining it mite be. nahh im just plaayin. this write was good like i could relate and shyt.

    the end is awsome cuz it ends with wonder.
    | Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      ur not as bad as i expected when you said [censored] at it that was actualy pretty good im not one to go around tellin people what to do i jest let u know i like it ^_^ take care talk to u latter maybe
    | Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by Doom_Hammer | [ Reply to This ]


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