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Author: LocketzVC
ASL Info:    18/F/pa
Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 12 /42 /18
Words: 41
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Open your heart to other....
Look at the world through my eyes...
You'd be amazed...
Everything has Beauty in it!
Outside as well as in
Just open your mind to the possibilities...
So don't judge outside alone
Look in as well

Submitted on 2006-08-10 21:08:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is great. Opening your mind to new things. Seeing what others see the world as. It's something I wonder what is like every day. and that last line "don't judge outside alone, look inside as well" that reminded me of that old saying, "Don't judge a book by it's cover." You have to look inside to see the good stuff.

Nice poem
| Posted on 2006-08-10 00:00:00 | by PiperH | [ Reply to This ]

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