One big question mark. by fiery whisper

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Submission Name: One big question mark. dots

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Author:	fiery whisper
ASL Info:	21/F/Bangladesh
Elite Ratio:	5.13 - 51/49/33
Words:	59

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	135
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	411

Description:
A whole lot of I-don't-know-whats. Just ended up writing four liners last night.

One big question mark. dots

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Super fine crystal,
Glistening amidst the dew.
A chaos of colours,
Lost but to few.

Little summer madness,
The sun sets behind you.
When the night freezes winter,
What will you do?

Love and its demise,
An end, we shall surmise
Till the beginning shall suffice
The riotous on the rise.

Submitted on 2006-08-11 01:07:13 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  interesting...I certainly liked the line, 'if the night freezes winter, what will you do?' good stuff, and well done!

IHS,
zac
| Posted on 2006-08-14 00:00:00 | by littleshuford | [ Reply to This ]
  This is touching and well crafted. I hate this comment bored. somethimes I feel like an idiot. Oh.. I liked your poem, gr8 wording...LOL But this is truly good. Thank you
| Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by manicsmuse | [ Reply to This ]
  This is actually a very deep poem that when you read this too yourself a couple of times this takes on a life of its own and leaves the Reader eager to want to move forward in Life
I Really like how you spoke of the winter
For in the Winter it seems we are much more relaxed as the coldness or the snow seems to bring more time for us to achieve our Goal of living happy and peaceful
And Excellent Job
I Loved this!!!
God Bless
Ron

Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
Ron
| Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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