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    dots Submission Name: PEACEdots
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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsPEACEdots
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    Blankets of satin , white heat ,glass sweats on a bed side table. There is no brilliant sunset or calm before the storm. It waits .quietly watching. I some times can elude it as I have tonight. But I know it is patient. And soon I will gently lay my weary head in its boney hands.




    Submitted on 2006-08-11 11:39:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, this could be taken a couple of ways and leaving it up to the interpetation of the reader is really what poetry lends a hand to. Very nice and interesting. It left me thinking and your last night was excellent.
    | Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by Molly Densmore | [ Reply to This ]
      thank you that is what i strive for that every one sees it diffrent
    | Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]


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