your gone (tonya)
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i was having a very bad time... my girl friend died in a car crash and i didnt know how to cope with it still dont... its crap i know that but it was the emotion i felt then
your gone (tonya)
your dead didn't get to say bye reminded by life but no tears left to cry broken in half but that’s half to many times and every day I blame my self as I commit self harm crimes you left me cold but we were to young again reminded of the day the blue bird sung why you... wish it was me left me here as you went to the land of the free I will be freed of this guilt that was placed upon me all my emotions sway unpredictable as if it was one with the sea what I wouldn’t do for just one last moment even if it meant taking you from the heavens with out consent I couldn’t save you couldn’t even make it to your funeral... I was late as the heavens made its call I love you more than life if you lived for longer I would have want you to be my wife with out you I’m only half a book you were ripped from my life like a fish on a hook only half a boy what does this mean will never be able to start fresh with my couple of dreams to love but never be loved in return this is starting to put my life in concern |
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| This is sad, but full of love and rememberance. it's always hard to write about a lost loved one, there is always so much you feel and so little time or ink to put it all down. My favorite line is "without you Im only half a book," I really liked that, it shows you did put alot of thought into this. My heart goes out to you, Im sorry that you had to experience this kind of loss, but everything happenes for a reason, and we learn from everything, with this experience you now have the tools to help others in the same situation. And that is very important. Stay strong. And Keep writing. | Posted on 2007-07-03 00:00:00 | by Olivia Jade | [ Reply to This ] | aww. thats so sweet and sad,too.i had almost a similar problem except w/ a child. i aslo wrote a poem about it similar to this one.like when you wrote 'why you..wish it was me'. it's in my journal, i posted it but my cuosin got onto my page and erased it.just didn't have the time to post it again.any way i loved this poem, there were a few spelling errors but w/e i don't like to point that out much.people get mad wen i say that. sorry about you girl tonya. | jenn | Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by bbcherry | [ Reply to This ] | Another great piece. I'm so sorry you lost her. She was lucky to have you. All of it is very sad - especialy lines 1, 4, 13, 14, 16, 21 and 22. Two lines that stand out as amazing are lines 12 and 18. There's no way this qualifies for crap and the emotion is genuine. I liked it, even though it breaks my heart for you. | | Posted on 2006-08-29 00:00:00 | by Lisa Milligan | [ Reply to This ] | time dulls the pain, but doesnt take it away | the years will pass, but you will love again,your so young Rak,it will happen again,believe in that dont forget her, just keep her in your heart ~Tracy | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by DesecratedDream | [ Reply to This ] | |
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