Description: this sucks when ya read it but if ya heard me scream it like a psycho who is bent on Love while on stage ya might understand the picture or the message I am trying to send---picture danzig with the Misfits and that is this style song
ripping you -------------------------------------------
ripping you
Except each side
Try not to detest
But confide
in some
more than usual
suspects remain suspect
to those too direct
nothings perfect
but I am so close
I still wouldn’t tell
Of this hell story
That she told me
never to speak of
But then I fell,
again…
slipped up
ripped up
in some downtown ally
I’ve only seen in my dreams
nothings new
in the same ole do see doh
only you knew
I was not what ya wanted
Never wanted to be forever haunted
by my
painfull cries
last place never gets a prize
my blankened eyes
never hid the disguise
my failing heart
was always untrue
right was wrong
from the start
of ripping you apart
***ChOrUs***
(((((((ripping you apart
was all I ever wanted
I felt that you deserved
every woman
and girl
I hate all of you
but it's you I hate
most of all)))))))))))))))))
hey as a writer and a fellow singer, i can understand this message clearly. i am actually going through something like this situation of love. my babe just left me bout 3 weeks ago and it's been the hardest thing for me to deal with and i just wrote a soong base on her called "HOLD ON!" which i posted just a moment ago. but anyways bout the song. i love the way you put such emotion and scaring into the words you chose. it shows how much you were hurt and torn by this person. the wording couldn't really get any better. i also could deffinatly picture this as a song that misfits would sing. sometimes i wish i could sing death metal like that but i'm a soft rock, hard rock, soft metal type of singer. but i'd love to hear this live someday. and rock on. who knows maybe one day we'll hear one anothers songs live someday.
Submission Name: ripping you
