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Love that is not madness is not love.


Author: Akai_Ame
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I used to think that after Charlie i would never be able to find anything that made me happy again. I'm starting to see that while i may have/ still do love him, i wasn't happy with him. All i worried about was if i pleased him, if i said the right things, did the right stuff. And now i just plain don't give a damn... I wanted to get over his so much that my whole attatude changed. I'm a different person than i was before i met him. I'm far from that shy little girl i was. And you know what... I'm a much happier person


Love that is not madness is not love.



There it is again.
But where could I have gone wrong?
I thought I was safe.
Thought I was strong.

Yet I’m giving someone the chance,
Tho, I’ve been hurt before.
To do me in,
To hurt me some more.

I don’t understand it.
I was so determined not to be hurt.
And yet here I am again, going “Oh shit”

I know I shouldn’t get attached.
Shouldn’t look so forward to hearing from him.
Yet here I sit in suspense…
Wishing to see his smile…
Waiting to hear his voice…
Hoping this lasts a long while.

Never have I felt so at home.
Never have I smiled so carefree.
For once I’m not doing the saving.
Someone’s saving me.

I find I’m less and less like I use to be.
I’m not a shy girl anymore.
I guess this is the real me.

No longer do I pretend.
At least not with him.
I’m happy now.
And for once its not a sin.

I don’t worry what others think.
Don’t care if I please them.
I never use to speak my mind.
God… Now I do it all the time.

I guess in the end I’m who I should be.
It just took my heart being shattered…
And new chance at happiness…
But hey… That’s all that matters.




Submitted on 2006-08-12 00:55:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Your poem is deep it touched my soul...
Wish i could describe the feeling inside but my mind and heart flop word so ill just say this,
You are very talented ive told you before you take you work and publish it then write some more i know you think your not good enough but many think you are and i just hope ive helped you by far.
| Posted on 2006-08-12 00:00:00 | by Hollira Revile | [ Reply to This ]
  
I think this is a beautiful poem...Its of all the things that I actually wish my girlfriend would say...I just wanted to say that your poem here has touched me very much...

I know I shouldn’t get attached.
Shouldn’t look so forward to hearing from him.
Yet here I sit in suspense…
Wishing to see his smile…
Waiting to hear his voice…
Hoping this lasts a long while.

This was my favorite stanza of yours, I know I shouldnt be talking about myself, but, you I cant tell you how much it touches my own heart to read something that made me remember the voice of someone I have lost...I won't go on with that...

I just wanted you to know that your poem touched me deeply...please pm me back if you can...
| Posted on 2006-08-12 00:00:00 | by Crestfallenman | [ Reply to This ]


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