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You always hesitate

Author: LadyMerlina
ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 60 /93 /58
Words: 86
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Basic rantings, maybe you shouldn't pay it any mind.

You always hesitate

I make it so easy to understand:
Describe to you all thoughts
and emotions at hand.

I fell unwanted, unloved.
Unsexy. Rejected.

I always make the moves.
You simply follow.
When will you take the lead
and show me how much you love me?

My I love you's come easily.
But yours hesitate and shake.

How am I supposed to react
when I hear THAT tremor,
in your voice?
The one that TELLS me
How your I love you's are unsure.

Submitted on 2006-08-12 16:24:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Very very good!! You have expressed your feelings so well in this piece. I'm am new here and to see the quality of work I have seen and read is very refreshing. I enjoyed reading this, thank you....Molly
| Posted on 2006-08-12 00:00:00 | by Molly Densmore | [ Reply to This ]

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