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Author: manicsmuse
ASL Info:    28
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The radiant sun spills its light onto me.
Listening to the waves make friends with the shore,
becoming so serene it haunts me.

Reeling in thoughts.
Days pass and I see the error in my ways.
I have become the hatred to dispell.

The sun is covered in clouds,
and the sound of the water becomes hypnotic.
I hate the sun,
burns me to my soul.
The soil stains.
The beauty of this earth just isn't enough.

I want more.
Drugs to lift me to God.
Money to feel so whole.

To wallow in sin and profess it is a good deed.
So happy with unhappiness.
Need to be happy.

Dirty with this lie.
I am a living contradiction.

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