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    dots Submission Name: Dear little ones coming,dots

    Author: bbcherry
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 79/34/16
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       from a child that you are now, till you are too old to be anything anymore...

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    dotsDear little ones coming,dots

    your inside
    gaining all that you can gain
    in time you will free yourself
    and take space for another
    your mind will be wonderous
    trying to understand
    these new surroundings
    by questioning
    all senses
    that you come across
    most will be waiting
    for your reaction
    others will try and deprive you
    of your well being
    everything you do will determine
    your future
    as well as what others do for you
    again in time
    you will feel
    that you have achieved
    all that you can
    and just let your mind run free
    till you no longer can
    be brave
    for all take this into their own life
    you are not alone

    Submitted on 2006-08-13 17:48:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2007-05-15 00:00:00 | by SAMEER | [ Reply to This ]
      to me this sounded like a pep talk for life like trying to prepare yourself for the things that are to come and the way people are it may have a different meaning but this realy sounds like a talk a good person would give to a child i like it in the sence that if it was directed at me i would listen rather than just ignore them for trying to make feel like im just a stupid child this is realy different i like it :)

    Rak ^)
    | Posted on 2006-08-14 00:00:00 | by dark figure | [ Reply to This ]

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