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    dots Submission Name: he believesdots
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    Author: ariadne
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 99/85/26
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       I remember s story about a guy who could never get this girl.he eventually started to hate her and dumped her down a well. he was at her funeral, crying and smiling to himself


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    dotshe believesdots
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    he used to believe
    that he was better off without her
    he still believes in a totally different sense
    he admits
    that peace has finally come

    he wants to believe
    that they will never ever find her
    he stops to grieve to show the world he's right
    never admits
    that she wont come home

    he believes
    they'll never search the well
    he likes to believe
    the world is better off without her
    he is glad
    he took the time to kill her




    Submitted on 2004-05-19 15:31:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This really creeps me out. It is very creative. I don't know if you meant this in a literal sense, but it surely shocked me. Sometimes in ways we have to "kill" people... or hurt them in order to find peace for ourselves. That's the meaning I obtained from this... i liked it.
    | Posted on 2004-05-19 00:00:00 | by Cai | [ Reply to This ]


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