-Capitales -Mistakes: It's, than -The "and" in the third last stanza just doesn't seem to belong there, nor does the of in the second last stanza. -Usually a semi-colon [;] ends a verse -Using the three consecutive dots to hang a thought doesn't work in poems, unless they are the ending note. Like the last one you used would be acceptable.
Besides the grammatical stuff; personal advice: Never make compromises when it comes to loving a person. Love them wholy, and entirely for who they are. Never consider a guy "acceptable." Either he's it, or he isn't.