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    dots Submission Name: donedots
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    Author: submarine
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 128/91/45
    Words: 49
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    I dont see it in your eyes
    That feeling that was there before,
    Dont understand what happened
    What did i do wrong?
    I know they say i should move on now,
    But its easier said than done.
    So i'm Faking to be over you,
    thats the only way out.




    Submitted on 2006-08-14 11:41:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this. Only time will heal cuts, but nothing can make the scars go away. Love sucks sometimes espially when someone doesn't love you back. Very good write.
    Keep it up hun,
    -Jenny
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like this i no exactly what ur goin thru
    | Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by justkillme08 | [ Reply to This ]
      Love sometimes can cause our lives to stand still, as we wait, wonder and hope for things to go back to how they once were.

    Sometimes they do, and sometimes they don't.

    Love can be so kind, but it can also be so cruel.

    I enjoyed reading your piece.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-10-29 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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