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    dots Submission Name: Thanx e-harmonydots
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    Author: Mykquillion
    ASL Info:    20/M/NEB
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 109/124/41
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
    Total Views: 582
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    dotsThanx e-harmonydots
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    Call me whatcha will
    Call me which you wonít
    Itís not like you ever mattered
    Itís not even a close call.




    Submitted on 2006-08-14 15:29:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is pretty witty really
    you play on words well here.
    i really aint got nothing to say...
    well done!

    thanx e-harmony
    | Posted on 2006-08-15 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmm intresting, guessing you dont like E-Harmony... lol but its just a little short even for a short poem, but mybe thats the way you wanted. I just would have added a little more description.
    | Posted on 2006-08-14 00:00:00 | by Hesitation | [ Reply to This ]


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