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    Author: Unwritten_Leo92
    ASL Info:    14/F/Rhode Island
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 2/4/11
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Misc/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 895
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    Bytes: 349



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    Why must you be
    Fat or
    Skinny?
    I'm
    Me and
    That's
    All
    That
    Counts..
    Right?
    Not
    How much I weight
    Or
    What size pants I wear.
    I like being me.
    Even if that means being fat.




    Submitted on 2006-08-14 23:46:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      well said!! way too much importance is put on how we look, it is how we feel about ourselves and what is INSIDE that matters. i couldn't agree with you more.
    your poem makes its point in very few words,which is good, but i feel a lot more could be said on the matter.
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-08-15 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]


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