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    dots Submission Name: There is still hopedots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/623/381
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 688
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    Bytes: 614



    Description:
       I wrote this also about three years ago. And it looks like from my hand writing I wrote part of it at one point then came back and wrote the rest. That is why there is a sudden change in feeling. Let me know what you think though thankx.


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    dotsThere is still hopedots
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    The pain is addicting
    Taking me by the hand
    And finishing me off
    Although at night I am relieved
    I am released
    For the pain cannot find me
    When my head falls upon
    My pillow during my restless nights
    The pain makes up for lost time
    Scare attacks come upon me at times
    There is still though
    For tomorrow is a new begining for this life of mine
    I do not know when I will take my last breath
    Or whom I may fall in love with
    All I'm sure of is that I've got a life to live
    And where it goes is up to me




    Submitted on 2006-08-15 04:47:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      great tats da way to go you b who u wanna b not wat ever1 else wants more power to you
    | Posted on 2006-08-15 00:00:00 | by brokenbylove | [ Reply to This ]
      i really liked this. i have been going through a rough time and this gives me hope that i can turn my life around....good job!!!:)
    -sam
    | Posted on 2006-10-08 00:00:00 | by bloddyrazorgirl | [ Reply to This ]


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