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    dots Submission Name: Scotia McTaco Bankdots
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    Author: lynn marsters
    ASL Info:    20/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 49/61/32
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 960
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 451



    Description:
       sorry about the title just trying for attention in the choas, at least it's different eh?, and that's what I was going for with this piece, something different,
    -peace


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    dotsScotia McTaco Bankdots
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    lonely... that what she was
    lonely... that's what he was
    breath
    they see
    eachother
    their love
    (the light)
    and are assured
    they know
    what we know
    (what I know)
    and are assured
    of each other
    of love
    (of God)
    and are assured
    of peace and life and beauty
    in this spellbinding
    captivating
    (loving)
    world




    Submitted on 2006-08-15 16:57:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This reminds me of my current situation. My ex and I are considering trying things again, because every time we try to date new people, something totally random happens. We're still making a decision, but from our conversations, we both know there's still a lot of love, even if it's not always showing. This piece is different, but I love it for it's simplicity and the fact that I can relate to it. Keep up the great work.
    | Posted on 2007-08-16 00:00:00 | by Keaton Volkov | [ Reply to This ]
      Well it is diffrent, & I think its cool.
    But then I'm not in love. But I know one day I will be. take care
    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2006-08-15 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]


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