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Scotia McTaco Bank

Author: lynn marsters
ASL Info:    20/f/canada
Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 49 /61 /32
Words: 55
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Average Vote:    4.0000
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sorry about the title just trying for attention in the choas, at least it's different eh?, and that's what I was going for with this piece, something different,

Scotia McTaco Bank

lonely... that what she was
lonely... that's what he was
they see
their love
(the light)
and are assured
they know
what we know
(what I know)
and are assured
of each other
of love
(of God)
and are assured
of peace and life and beauty
in this spellbinding

Submitted on 2006-08-15 16:57:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This reminds me of my current situation. My ex and I are considering trying things again, because every time we try to date new people, something totally random happens. We're still making a decision, but from our conversations, we both know there's still a lot of love, even if it's not always showing. This piece is different, but I love it for it's simplicity and the fact that I can relate to it. Keep up the great work.
| Posted on 2007-08-16 00:00:00 | by Keaton Volkov | [ Reply to This ]
  Well it is diffrent, & I think its cool.
But then I'm not in love. But I know one day I will be. take care
The Poor Man's Poet.
| Posted on 2006-08-15 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]

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