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    dots Submission Name: Honestydots
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    Author: Robert Neville
    ASL Info:    16/m/London
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 10/192/232
    Words: 219
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1197
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    Honesty

    I draw pictures nobody looks at
    I write poems nobody reads
    I have opinions that just donít matter
    I cut myself til it bleeds
    I write stories people scoff at
    I read books just to feel
    I play music no one likes
    I wish that I werenít real
    I have parents who donít believe me
    I get no apologies
    Iím unfaithful and undeserving
    Never trust me, please
    Iím a hypocrite and a sycophant
    Iíd scream but no one would hear
    Iím a liar and a loser
    I always give in to fear
    Iím dishonest and disloyal
    Iím bitter and unkind
    I never say a bad word
    But I rarely speak my mind
    I go blank at confrontation
    Or I blow a fuse
    Iím an inconsiderate bastard
    I ignore, I steal, I use
    Iím unoriginal and unheard
    People donít know me
    So donít believe a word
    Iím a liar and a sinner
    I always get my way
    Yet you stick by me through thin and thinner
    When you know Iíll never stay
    Iím not worth it
    Just leave me
    For once, I beg you, believe me
    Itís not worth your time
    Trying to make me feel fine
    Or to get on your knees and pray
    You could rip your heart out
    Iíd still leave you the next day




    Submitted on 2006-08-15 18:06:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      man that is really deep and really out there ur painting urself as sumone everyone loves 2 hate but its gud keep at it
    | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by brokenbylove | [ Reply to This ]
      Dam!

    ~*Jackie*~

    Great work going
    | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      wow that sux mannnn. u were really honest yo. you should headbang and throw things at people. it will help u. and you will become a better person.(=



    Grim
    | Posted on 2006-08-15 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome!!!
    and i relate to it alot
    this exactly how i used to feel
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome!!!
    and i relate to it alot
    this exactly how i used to feel
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome!!!
    and i relate to it alot
    this exactly how i used to feel
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome!!!
    and i relate to it alot
    this exactly how i used to feel
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome!!!
    and i relate to it alot
    this exactly how i used to feel
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome!!!
    and i relate to it alot
    this exactly how i used to feel
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome!!!
    and i relate to it alot
    this exactly how i used to feel
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome!!!
    and i relate to it alot
    this exactly how i used to feel
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome!!!
    and i relate to it alot
    this exactly how i used to feel
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome!!!
    and i relate to it alot
    this exactly how i used to feel
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome!!!
    and i relate to it alot
    this exactly how i used to feel
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome!!!
    and i relate to it alot
    this exactly how i used to feel
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]


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