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    dots Submission Name: More to Medots
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    Author: 777sacrites777
    ASL Info:    24/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 343/189/83
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 1380
    Average Vote:    4.5000
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    How come you didn't cry
    when I walked away?
    How do you move on
    the very next day?

    How can you pretend
    that nothing's gone wrong?
    Why be "just friends"
    when we've loved for this long?

    How can you be okay
    when i'm torn apart?
    Why don't you have
    this broken heart?

    Why don't you miss me
    when without you I'd die?
    Why don't you care
    if I'm with another guy?

    How can you forget
    how great it used to be?
    I guess that our love
    just meant more to me...




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      thats so sad...i feel like this alot...
    but i can feel the emotion coming off of this.
    | Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by dark lover | [ Reply to This ]
      ohh how the heart hurts so badly!! Your fellings are well respresented and can be so true...i love it
    | Posted on 2006-10-06 00:00:00 | by wildriver | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very sad & sweet poem, & once again i can relate 2 this alot. I'm definatly addin this 2 me fav's, keep up the good work =

    {{ Lynoire }}
    | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by bloodydreamer27 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is nice, yet sad (if ya know wot i mean?)
    you make your pain heard. well done.
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      this easily da best poem ive read i can relate 2 this soooo much and uve hit it right on the knocker brilliant work
    | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by brokenbylove | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem doesn't have much originality to it at all, and there's nothing very noteworthy about the wording of it either. It's honest and heartfelt, but that's about all I can say to it's defense. For a poem like this, try looking for different ways to say things rather than just flat out saying them.
    | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by freshcookies | [ Reply to This ]
      awww this is so sad/sweet/I totally know what you meant, it's sad when one person seems so uneffected and you find yourself being torn up over something that seems to mean nothing to the other person. you worded this really well and although it wasn't the most poetic thing I've ever read, it was very honest and very realistic and thats what made me really love this write, I honestly wouldn't change anything except maybe clean up some of the wording so it sounds just a bit more original, other then that great write,
    ~jess
    | Posted on 2006-08-15 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, I can really feel this poem. It's so sad and a little indignant. I really like the flow, too. Keep it up. Byeyahs
    ~Lizzy~
    | Posted on 2006-08-23 00:00:00 | by Lizzy B | [ Reply to This ]
      Very well written poem, I can feel just what you are saying in it, keep up the writing, Dean
    | Posted on 2006-08-17 00:00:00 | by Survivor_Dean | [ Reply to This ]


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